This week we are supposed to write about what makes writing good and what makes writing bad. Bad writing to me is when some uses the same word over and over again. I like it when an author in a book uses different words that when your reading you think what does that word means so you go and look it up.

As I was reading this week I found some good and some bad writing.

Good writing ( He stumbled unable to see as a crushing weight bore him to the ground)

Bad writing ( Then suddenly a trail opened up in front of them)

So what do you think is good writing and what is bad writing?

Ten differences between good and bad writing